Music Be the Food of Love ...

First things first: I suck at titles (It's a quote from Shakespeare that goes "If music be the food of love, play on!")

Second things second: I apologize for the ever-so-crappy quality, Mr. Scanner has gone beserk and this was a christmas present for a friend of mine. Hopefully it looks more... i dunno, vintage? *FAIL*
Another music theme, i love the headphones. Anyways, hope you enjoy it!

4/3/10 EDIT: Made the image clearer and brighter!

Materials: Ballpoint pen, mechanical pencils, white crayon, watercolors, and salt for the texture (the texture which you cannot see, whoops)

Reference here: [link]


So what do you think in general? Does the contrast do the job? Is the anatomy alright? Is there a way I can add more depth to the face? I have more trouble with profile perspectives, so please help? (Looking back, I'd probably would have adding more shading to the lips.)
Comments and constructive crit. are welcomed and greatly apperciated!